Comments on: Devon Finds a Glow

By: Thom

Thom — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 12:51:09 +0000

Well..here’s a couple more luau and lua = party and bathroom. Samantha is my up and coming spider

By: Alice in BC Canada

Alice in BC Canada — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 06:42:27 +0000

Oh ya, Aloha, forgot about that one. So Mahalo is my second Hawaiian word, haha. I love learning and plan to continue all the days of my life. Now… you have me curious. Who is Samantha?

By: Thom

Thom — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 05:38:25 +0000

Aloha means hello and goodbye and Mahalo means thank you. Isn’t it great that we never stop learning. Just wait until you meet Samantha…you might think differently

By: Thom

Thom — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 05:37:04 +0000

Thank you…or should I say arf arf !!

By: Reba Jane Rottenweiler

Reba Jane Rottenweiler — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 01:50:11 +0000

BARK!! Two paws up, Thom.

By: Alice in BC Canada

Alice in BC Canada — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 01:48:17 +0000

I just learned my first Hawaiian word! I thought mahalo maybe mean hello or something, but looked it up on Dictionary.com and found it’s ‘thank you’. I don’t know how to say “you’re most welcome” in Hawaiian, so English will have to do, lol. Are you saying that all this writing it driving you buggy? Hahaha. I think I’ll have to think twice before stepping on any bugs in the future. Maybe they have names and families, friends… maybe some one is even writing a story about them. To have it end with someone stepping on them…. well, now that I think of it, if it’s a spider I’ll still stomp it, given the opportunity. )

By: Thom

Thom — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 20:27:08 +0000

Mahalo Alice. To be honest with you I never knew there would be so many bugs in this. But every week they just appear. And with all of you to be able to follow it helps me a great deal

By: Thom

Thom — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 20:26:00 +0000

Reba my girl…they are going to show up…I just need to figure out when. Woof!

By: Alice in BC Canada

Alice in BC Canada — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 20:10:13 +0000

Hi Thom. I actually came by yesterday and read, then got pulled away, so now I’m back to tell you how much I enjoyed your story this week. Your writing is definitely improving with each installment. I’m really liking your little bugs, and I don’t like bugs, haha.

By: Reba Jane Rottenweiler

Reba Jane Rottenweiler — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 20:06:35 +0000

Whoof, Thom. Woofenderful story, but where’s the dogs? All you gots iz bugs… YUCK! They’re not even good to play woof!!

By: Thom

Thom — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 17:05:42 +0000

Mahalo so much Carletta. And believe me I haven’t done writing until this blog. I look at you, Alice, Betty, Dr. John, Juliana, Quilly, Nessa to name a few and am awed by what I read. But you know what I just do what I do, right or wrong because I enjoy it. And I am so glad you pointed out that sentence. Big mistake in the sex on that as my next chapter he is a she LOL. So I went back and had to correct it. But sssshhhhhh we wont tell anyone!

By: Carletta

Carletta — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 14:02:08 +0000

THOM!
You commented to Jientje that you were new to this writing -I have to say one would never know you hadn’t done this all your life.
I’m loving every chapter in this story.
I have to tell you my favorite line – ‘peak his head through the security of the silk braids.’ What wonderful imagery!

By: Thom

Thom — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 23:08:22 +0000

Thanks. It’s from being around all you excellent writers. I get ideas and it’s bound to rub off somehow

By: juliana

juliana — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 22:06:38 +0000

ah, thom, your stories are getting better and better. oyu gotta love devon and his adventures!

By: Thom

Thom — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 21:55:41 +0000

Oh I sure do Jientje. I’m new to this writing and you can certainly tell. I look forward to reading more and getting to know you better. Mahalo for your kind words.